2013年11月6日 星期三

Topic/ Main idea/ Introduction

*Topic:
-To know that grieving over(let go) isn't easy.
-How to comfort the pain of loss. (Everyone will face this problem one day.)
-How much will the experience of loss change a person. (This is more about myself, so I don't know if it's appropriate but I think this is more close to what I really want to know more about myself.)
*Main idea:
Everyone all know that when we have a problem, we need to face it, solve it, and let go it. Everyone knows that, but how many people can do it? To someone, maybe it doesn't take a lot of time, yet someone may never get through it.
*Introduction:
Since people will all leave(die) one day, we all will face loss(death), too. How many people can live like Morrie when they know they're going to die? Therefore, I think this can also be a lesson for people to learn and get a close look at it. Though it sound ridiculous, at least I think it is; why do people need to learn about death? Or learn how to say goodbye to others? Sometimes these things are just way too common to accept them when they happened to us unexpectedly. I am now one of those ridiculous people, and this made me change who I was. I don't know why and how it changed me, I'm still looking for the answer and that's why I'm doing this project. 
To talk more about this may help me broaden my mind, and maybe one day I'll suddenly realize that it's not that serious, who knows? Self-discovering is difficult, you have to find out your own strange behavior, thoughts... whatever, it's just difficult to tell if you're changed or not; also, you have to keep asking yourself questions, and answer. It's almost like philosophy. I always feel tired after thinking these stuff, I've used all my brain cell to think of questions about death, myself, my friend..., too many things stirred up in my brain, it's such a mess.
Death is the destination of our lives. I say that death isn't the end but a new start, what about you? we all have the chance to face "loss," no matter you're leaving others or others are leaving you. Try to find a best way to relax yourself to comfort the pain when it's necessary before it's too late.

1 則留言:

  1. The main idea is still too broad. You would like to deal with the issue of death, so let's narrow the "loss" here to death.

    Don't hurry to start the introduction. Post another entry including a new main idea and the topic sentences for your at least three paragraphs BEFORE Sunday (Nov. 9). I'll check your new entry before we get to the actual writing part.

    As for the topic, I think we can combine the three ideas you mentioned.

    Meanwhile, if you can read the book you told me about, it'll be lovely!

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